what do you think?
hoping for critique and comments... thank you!
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Posts: 19 05/02/09 04:18:23 |
what do you think? hoping for critique and comments... thank you! sidonie |
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Posts: 10802 05/02/09 07:58:13
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Do you have a link to the rest of your work?
I am not a fan of any of these, but I don't know how they compare to the rest of your work.
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Posts: 2368 05/02/09 10:27:26
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same here... if these are your first, keep until you get something better... otherwise, I agree with Em.. among other issues, I'm not a fan of the model
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Posts: 20 05/03/09 01:58:41 |
no, i have no link to my work yet, but i am redoing my website (the things you can see there are no make up work).
EmElle: something that is not clear to me: do you mean with "not a fan of" that the make up is done worse, or you don't like the set, the styling, the model... or all all of that? sidonie |
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Posts: 10803 05/03/09 08:47:54
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I don't know if the makeup is "done worse". Worse than previous work? I can't say without seeing your previous work. And that's part of
my critique. I agree with Olga that if this is all you have, you have to keep these until you get better. If you already have better, pitch these.
To be more clear: I don't like these, any aspect of them. But you're in Austria, so there may be an esthetic there that doesn't necessarily agree with other fashion markets. I may not effectively be able to critique to your market. Even so, there are issues with these shots. The makeup techniques used need to be cleaner and more precise, and I mean that on several levels. The model is not good. The photography is not good. The post work is not good. We should not be seeing all those lines in her neck on the first shot. We should not see multiple skin tones throughout her face and body in any of these shots. The last shot has the worst posing. Her right foot looks like a deadly weapon.
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Posts: 21 05/05/09 02:16:47 |
to EmElle: i ment with "done worse" if you mean it is done badly from the technique (as far as you can see on the photo) and not if it's done
worse than my previous work. pleas excuse my bad english!
but you said it clear in the second break. i don't know what i should answer on that... thanks for taking time to comment EmElle, i will try to mind that all by my next work! sidonie |
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