65 views, so I'll go first.

You asked for comments on your work, but the lighting and poses do nothing for the model or your work, I'm afraid.

If I try and look beyond all of that I'd say the makeup looks best in #1. Both because ít's not a closeup and because it looks more like the exotic style I would expect with a belly dancer. The red lipstick is less prominent in #1 which is a good thing, because personally I would have used a gentler shade on her. More nude, and possibly glossier.

In #2 the lips look kindof harsh, and the top lip could have used a little more "oomph". It's thin looking compared to the bottom. Again, a softer colour would have have helped with that.

Also, in #2 the eyebrows could have been more defined and groomed. That would make for a more exotic feel to the whole look.
#1 works better in terms of eyemakeup and brows. They are stronger and look shapelier, possibly because she is looking up.

Overall I would have gone with a softer, more feminine look. More warmth in the skin/blush and I would have taken care of the tattoo. It looks out of place here.

HTH!

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Monique Heijboer
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